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Rock n Roll
-Titans Tower-
"Oh I'm sorry, did I ruin something romantic?" Terra said with a smirk as she sauntered into the Tower's main room. "Oh and I wouldn't try attacking because with the flick of my wrist ur house guest gets a rock shaped spear through her."
"Do it and I'll skin you alive." Raven said with anger in her voice and glowing eyes.
"oooooo Scary, I'm shakin in my geo boots. Raven if you had a spine you would've killed me years ago." Terra said with a smirk.
"HEY GEOBITCH!!!!" A voice yells from behind Terra. "Touch one hair on Mimi's head and we END YOU!!!"
Terra turned around angered by that grievous insult and came face to face with the RRB.
"AND JUST WHO THE HELL ARE YOU THREE?!?!?!?!?!"
"BRICK!!!"
"BUTCH!!!"
"BOOMER!!!"
"Oh lord." Terra sent the stone spear pointed at Mimi at them as a trio plasma blast turned the spear to dust.
As Terra's attack in frustration used the spear harming Mimi, Raven went postal like a momma bear as her demonic rage took over beating the hell out of Terra.
"So....... Friends or Foes?" Beast asked the brothers still ready for a fight.
"Let's put it this way, we like to get rowdy." Brick replied.
"And as long as you protect the kid we won't oppose you." Butch said.
"ummmmmmmm Guys, we've got company!!!!!!" Boomer yelled as Malchior and a small squad of Slade's soldiers arrived.
"Here take your leader's apprentice!!!" Raven yelled threw a severly wounded Terra at Malchior's feet. "Now leave before you get the same beating."
"Still mad about the broken heart Raven?" Malchior asked in a smug tone. "In any event Slade could care less if blonde bitch lives, she's become a liability to the Brotherhood. GEO-FORCE!!!!! Deal with your sister."
Just then a blonde super soldier with reinforced armor lifted his injured sister on his shoulders as they left with Malchior leaving the foot soldiers to deal with the Titans.
-Hours Later-
Raven had locked herself in her room since the fight with Terra and seeing Malchior again and she was confused. Seeing him again brought back everything little detail about how he had tricked her into loving him, using her to break free from the book, all of it. Beast hated seeing her like this and in an all too familiar setting he found himself outside Raven's room.
"I can't believe this is happening again, it's like deja vu." Beast knocked on the door and it was the original break up all over again."Raven, it's Beast...... Look I'm sorry again."
"For what? You're not the one who--"
"No it's not about dragon breath look...... I know he broke your heart and that seeing him today made you remember that, but......."
"I know and just like then I knew he was using me, using his charm to keep me from beating his brains in, but....... I've felt all alone since and--"
"I love you Rachel and I'm tired of being alone too........."
Raven opened the door looking at with tears in her eyes. "Beast look......"
"Rae you're my oldest and dearest friend and I'm tired of hiding it from you."
As they looked into each others eyes it finally happened, their lips met in the passion of the kiss time stood still before they knew it they were not only in Raven's room, but they were living a fantasy both of them had in many dreams. To many they were polar opposites, but deep down they knew in this moment they were perfect for each other. Between their troubled pasts and their equal shares of heartbreak.
-Brotherhood HQ-
"I will not tolerate insubordination, apprentice." Slade glared at Terra with hate in his eye.
"I apologize my master." Terra replied barely able to see.
Slade grabbed her by her throat as he began choke her. "Disobey me again....... And you die." Slade threw her to the ground as he gave her a new mission, find Jericho....
to be continued........ maybe
I'm not experienced in writing a good sex scene so if anyone wants to write one for this I'll reupload it and give you credit for that segment. Also need feedback on whether I should make this the final chapter or not.


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part 3 ---> [link]
part 4 ---> [link]
Part 5 ---> [link]
Part 6 ---> [link]

Part 8 ---> [link]
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sparkles-022811 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
i love how you did this!!! omg i was waiting to see how you would get them to get together!
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ChrisChaos369 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yeah took awhile with attacking exes and such, but I think it went well. now to decide whether the story continues or not.
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sparkles-022811 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
i think you should. have something where they are trying to find out why the kid has powers like raven. maybe have some parts where beast is wondering why they didn't realize there feelings for each other. maybe have a good fight bit. that's just some thoughts.
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ChrisChaos369 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i'll keep those in mind
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Foxkidd91 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
You did well my friend, do not stop please!! :3
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Mistralka Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I want Terra dead >< Slade, do me this favour and kill the bitch XD Why is it so short? T~T
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ChrisChaos369 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i dunno couldnt think of more to add at the time
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Mistralka Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Too bad. But at least it keeps on going ^^
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