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Broken Dreams part 4: Home Sweet Home
Nightwing: "Don't you guys ever learn?"
Cyborg: "Yeah we're only gonna kick yo butts again."
Gizmo: "Why cuz of that traitor you're dating you bucket of bolts?"
Jinx: "You're just mad I'm on the winning side now."
Red X: "Not exactly."
Mammoth: "Yeah we gots a leader thats way smarter than you Jinx."
Terra: "Miss me Titans?"
Cyborg: "You."
Nightwing: "I thought you lost your memory."
Terra: "Nope, but Beast Boy always was an idiot. It's funny my plan worked perfectly to destroy his life he's probably already offed himself."
Starfire: "ENOUGH!!!!"
Starfire couldn't stand to here anymore as she threw a starbolt Terra only to have it blocked by her sister, Blackfire. The Hive 5 had upgraded over the years only Mammoth and Gizmo from the original team were still involved. As the fight raged on it started out as usual. Starfire & Blackfire slammed each other through one building than another. Cy & Gizmo were fight the same tech vs tech fight they always have. Nightwing was fighting hand to hand combat with Red X neither with a clear advantage. Mammoth joined in where he could while Terra just stood there watching as if she was waiting for the right moment. Her moment came as her teammates were fell in front of her.
Cyborg: "Jinx now."
Terra realized something she hadn't noticed during the fight at this moment.
Terra: 'Where was Jinx during the fight?'
Just then Jinx's bad luck powers caused the street to collapse underneath the 5 villains. The Titans thought they had just won the fight.
Terra: "Nice try." Terra rose from the hole in the street surrounded by broken pieces of pavement. "My turn."
Her eyes glowed pure yellow, but just before she struck with her attack something happened.
"AZARATH METRION ZINTHOS"
Terra had been thrown to the ground by black energy that only one person could've used.
Terra: "Why you Bit--"
Before she could finish her statement a familiar green Ram hit her hard in the stomach knocking her off her feet. As she hit the ground she hit her head on the pavement knocking herself out cold. As the green ram it morphed into his human form the Titans looked on in amazement.
Beast Boy: "I still got it." He said with a giant smile on his face showing off the trademark tooth he'd become known for. As he stood there he realized there were 4 pairs of eyes staring right at him as if they've seen a ghost. "Hi guys."
The Hive 5 are up to no good again will The Titans be able to stop them or will Beast Boy & Raven return to find them dead or injured?
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Soulisblack Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
The new hive is pure failures they should actually try harder against four titans!!!!
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ChrisChaos369 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
agreed no organization or teamwork
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DeadGirlsRoses Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Student Writer
what happened to five? i cant find it D':
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ChrisChaos369 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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here we go it got seperated sorry bout that
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DeadGirlsRoses Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Student Writer
yay! :) thanks
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ChrisChaos369 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
no prob and the sequel is on the way as soon as i can come up with a story
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DeadGirlsRoses Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Student Writer
COOL! :)
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sweenytoddparody Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
nice drawing
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ChrisChaos369 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
well it's not mine. I only used it for a chapter cover.
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sweenytoddparody Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012
oh.. then congurats to who drew it :)
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LilliumCoronarium Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Student Writer
btw how did you add both a pic and text I needs to know!
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ChrisChaos369 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
oh its rather quite easy when u upload a new a story like i do a little box should appear right before the description that gives you the option of adding a picture to ur story. Hope that helps. and yes I am kinda glad im even thinking of the final chapter being a lead in to another project i'll be doing soon called Universal Martial Arts.
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LilliumCoronarium Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Student Writer
awsomeI'm glad! the only constructive criticism I might add is that the whole BeastBoy: (insert dialogue here) Raven: (insert dialogue here) is kinda redundant, it would be better, in my opinion, if you added somethinglike the more=>> he said, (insert adjetive/action here), "insert dialogue here".... ifyou get what I maen... It just gives more meat to your story and makes it flow a bit better :) :tighthug:
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ChrisChaos369 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ok i'll keep that in mind thanks for the honest input.
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LilliumCoronarium Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Student Writer
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ChrisChaos369 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i didnt get ur message till i was done with part 5 so dont think i ignored the advice
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LilliumCoronarium Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Student Writer
no i figured you got it late
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ChrisChaos369 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
well i'm starting part 6 now so if u got any suggestions let me know
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LilliumCoronarium Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Student Writer
Now arent you glad I convinced you to continue your story??? Good Job by the way! :tighthug:
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707cloud Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
LOVE IT! LOVE IT!! LOVE IT!!!!!!! i cant wait for chapture 5, what will? will beast boy get back into the TT or not? what will he think about tera tricking him? too meny qustions!!
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ChrisChaos369 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
we'll just have to see
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707cloud Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
OKAY! and i realy love it.
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ChrisChaos369 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yep chapter 5 will be up shortly
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